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PAPAS POESIE: 一楼半 Yilou Ban

5月 15, 2022

Yilou Ban
PAPAS POESIE

Neujahrsfeiern in der Fabrik,
Papa hat jahrelange Erfahrung,
in letzter Zeit hat er Fortschritte gemacht.
Er kommt sicher allein nach Haus.
Papa raucht nicht,
wird nicht verrückt, wenn er trinkt.
Aber er produziert Poesie.
Heute gießt ihm Mama Honig mit Wasser auf.
Ich nehm die Waschschüssel von gestern abend.
Papa sitzt sinnend am Tisch.
Auf einmal sagt er:
“Heute trink ich Maotai,
der ist fürs Kotzen zu teuer.”

Übersetzt von MW im Mai 2022

伊沙:本诗令我怀念起好演员傅彪来了,剧本里的台词是:"路易十三,我不吐,舍不得!",被其在拍摄现场发挥成:"十三,路易的,我不吐,舍不得!"一一简直是在教编剧:啥叫口语?也是在教口语诗人:口语诗也无止境。本诗来自于袁源的助攻,对其学生扶上马再送一程。

况禹点评《新诗典》一楼半《爸爸的诗》:被迫酒局的爸爸“可以一个人安全回家”,这句抓住了我,之后又是“喝醉后会写诗”“我都舍不得吐”,这样的诗一定来自生活,没法编,但一定需要作者日常的悉心打捞和剪裁,本诗做得不错。

​马金山|读一楼半的诗《爸爸的诗》的十一条:
1、于诗人而言,生活赋予人生的是诗;
2、真正的生活,最终都会被诗意所擦亮,这是我们经历的一切,还将回到生活当中;
3、一楼半,2001年5月12日生,陕西渭南人,曾就读于西安交大附中,现为厦门大学航院大三学生;
4、诗路的选择对于一个写作者而言,至关重要,因为它将是一个写作者的未来;
5、本诗以蓄满口语真气的声音,贴近实实在在的生活场景与细节,把一个鲜活的人物形象展现出来了,其中又饱含着人生复杂的辛酸与艰难;
6、诗里行间尽显一个人的生活,且充斥着满满的中国气息,既有纤细的感觉,又有对事物的细节化处理,在场而饱满;
7、尤其是浸透着呼吸和脉搏的感觉,不仅画面感十足,而且还颇具质感,在会心一笑的同时,又不免有些许忧思;
8、诗中描写的本身是人生的不易与职场的艰辛,而结尾处的两行爸爸的话,瞬间让人感到轻松愉快不少,而且还加重了诗意的气息;
9、诗题《爸爸的诗》,巧妙地融合了爸爸的人生经历,而这一切的一切都将成为诗;
10、本诗给予诗人的启示:“日常生活中隐含着巨大的诗意财富”;
11、人生之诗、生活之诗、艰辛之诗。

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TRUMPIN’ IN THE PENCE

11月 28, 2016

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TRUMPIN’ IN THE PENCE
(no apology)

How many pence must a trump trump down,
before you trump him a pence?
And how many pence must a white trump trump,
before he sleeps in the pence?
Yes, and how many trumps must the pences’s balls trump,
before they’re forever trumped?

The trumper, my pence, is trumpin’ in the pence,
the trumper is trumpin in the pence.

How many pence can the trumper expense,
before he is trumped to the pence?
And how many trumps can some trumpers expense,
before they’re allowed to be pence?
Yes, and how many trumps can a pence turn his trump,
pretending he just doesn’t wince?

The trumper, my pence, is trumpin’ in the pence,
the trumper is trumpin’ in the pence.

How many trumps must a pence trump up,
before he can trump the trump?
Yes, and how many trumps must one pence trump,
before he can hear trumpers trump?
And how many trumps will it take till he trumps
that too many trumpers have trumped?

The trumper, my pence, is trumpin’ in the pence,
the trumper is trumpin’ in the pence.

MW November 2016

PENCIN‘ IN THE PENCE

11月 27, 2016

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PENCIN’ IN THE PENCE
(another apology to B.D.!)

How many pence must a pence pence down,
before you pence him a pence?
And how many pence must a white pence pence, before he pens
in the pence?
Yes, and how many pence must the pence’s balls pence,
before they’re forever penced?

The pences, my pence are pencin’ in the pence, the pences are pencin’ in the pence.

How many pence can the pences expense,
before they are penced to the pence?
And how many pence can some pence expense,
before they’re allowed to be pence? Yes, and how many pence can a pence turn his pence,
pretending he just doesn’t pence?

The pences, my pence are pencin’ in the pence, the pences are pencin’ in the pence.

How many pence must a pence pence up before he can pence the pence?
Yes and how many pence must one pence pence before he can hear pences pence?
And how many pence will he pence till he pens that too many pences have penced?

The pences, my pence are pencin’ in the pence, the pences are pencin’ in the pence.

MW November 2016


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