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EIN TÜRSCHILD – 刘傲夫 Liu Aofu

7月 6, 2022

Liu Aofu
EIN TÜRSCHILD

Im Dorf bei mehreren Onkeln
über der Tür
war ein Schild befestigt,
aus Email.
Rote Zeichen auf weißem Grund.
Ich war sehr neugierig,
wollt auf einen Hocker steigen,
so ein Schild runternehmen und damit spielen.

Als ich erwachsener war
und ein paar Zeichen lesen konnte,
“Ruhmreiche Märtyrer-Familie”,
hab ich bemerkt,
als Kind hab ich nichts kapiert.
So etwas
ist nicht zum Spielen.

2022-02-28
Übersetzt von MW im Juli 2022

新世纪诗典作品联展#刘傲夫#(14.0)

 

《新诗典》小档案:刘傲夫,本名刘水发,男,1979年2月出生于江西瑞金,现居北京。是由《新世纪诗典》推出的在中国当下具有广泛影响的代表性诗人,创建有傲夫诗社、中国现代诗巡展网(www.zgxdsxz.com.cn),影响和带动了一大批诗歌新人的写作。

伊沙推荐:小时候,爷奶在时,我家尚有资格挂一牌:"革命军属"。因大伯而挂,已经够牛的。诗中所写"光荣烈属"就更震人了,我们小孩经过门口不敢造次。刘傲夫敢如实写,说明他未被异化,我能够在此推,说明我未被异化,在纷纭乱世中,想做好诗人得用心好生做。

况禹点评《新诗典》刘傲夫《一块门牌》:美好无忌的童年,沉甸甸的岁月记忆。刘傲夫的诗,生命的厚度在悄然增加。祝贺他。

汪宏宗浅评刘傲夫《一块牌匾》:我最近在做同题诗选,读到本诗,我在想如果以“童年无忌”为题,这首作品绝对是上乘作品,并且也很难有作品能出其右。语言浅显易懂,读者读起来很舒服,蜻蜓点水便抵达诗意。地球那边还在战争,这样的牌子正在被批量生产。

【亚坤评诗】
一块门牌
作者|刘傲夫
(内容详见新诗典今日推送)

这又是一首诗歌切口很小,内容体量很大的诗。
这也是一首具有独特“素材意义”和“内容标签”的诗。
可以讲,谁写了就是谁的。它看似很简单,实则需要对生命经验进行“回望”、“确认”和“提纯”。
说实话,不是所有人都能“提纯”的。
这种调动需要“老实”、“真诚”和“生命的厚度”。它需要活出来,而不是“造出来”。

对于本诗,我特别喜欢作者的语气。尤其是后半段。这是一种把技巧和形式都放下之后的“真我”回望。
读者可以仔细去体会这首诗背后作者的“心境”。那是用时间、经验、生活、情感和生命累积出来的“一种澄明”!

(马亚坤.2022.07.05.上海)

读刘傲夫《一块门牌》|雪也

读到刘傲夫这首诗,我不由得就想到人民英雄纪念碑,想到人民英雄纪念碑的碑文。我第一次读到这碑文,我的内心是很震撼的,不妨在此抄写如下:“三年以来,在人民解放战争和人民革命中牺牲的人民英雄们永垂不朽!三十年来,在人民解放战争和人民革命中牺牲的人民英雄们永垂不朽!由此上溯到一千八百四十年,从那时起,为了反对内外敌人,争取民族独立和人民自由幸福,在历次斗争中牺牲的人民英雄们永垂不朽!”

我们在小学时,经常被教导:我们和平的生活,是革命先烈们抛头颅洒热血换来的。老师说多了,似乎心里,还有点逆反,有点排斥,有点怀疑,有点不相信。随着年龄的增长,随着对近代历史和中国革命历史的逐渐了解,我是相信的。革命先烈们,有追求,有信仰,不畏死。渣滓洞的先烈们,不惧严刑拷打。我们应该崇敬英雄,我们应该纪念英雄,我们应该缅怀英雄。

回到刘傲夫的这首诗歌,总体来看,是通过对比的手法,以很小的切口和视角,来触及或揭示宏大的主题。直到第二节的“光荣烈属”四字一出现,诗歌的主题也就出现了。而且最后两句,是反向来说,“那东西怎么可以,拿来玩呢”,这里就看出作者内心的自省或悔悟。第一节,回忆童年,云淡风轻。第二节,寥寥数笔,深刻反省,卒章显志。我们应该为这样英雄辈出的家族,缅怀!致敬!

因此说来,这是一首正能量的诗歌,具有励志作用。我们的诗歌,需要批判、反讽和揭露;我们的诗歌,也需要褒扬、赞美和歌咏。

一块门牌
@刘傲夫

村里好几位
叔伯家的门楣上
都钉有一块
搪瓷牌子
白底红字
我觉得挺新奇
甚至想搬凳子
拆下一块来玩

长大后我
认识了那几个字
“光荣烈属”
就觉得小时候自己
真不懂事
那东西怎么可以
拿来玩呢

2022.2.28

 

 

 

WARSAW

8月 3, 2015

Warsaw bicycleWARSAW

the eagle is not beautiful
the shadow of the eagle is
they have a chapel for Katyn
across from uprising square
the uprising was very brave
they won at first
the Red Army was there
just across the river
but the Red Army waited
then the Germans came back
they razed Warsaw City
the Red Army waited
that was in 1944
before that was the Ghetto
the Ghetto uprising
Stalin’ s culture palace stands in its place
in the place of the Ghetto
Katyn
was in 1940
tens of thousands of Polish officers
killed by Soviet intelligence
Ukrainians too
they have a chapel for Katyn
across from Uprising Square
tens of thousands of names
and a beautiful eagle
they say
I like its shadow

MW July 2015

Warsaw eagle
SUNSHINE IN WARSAW
Jacqueline Winter

A beautiful summer morning. Biking through the historical center. The bike return station is next to the monument of the 1944 uprising against the Nazis. HOW many dead and wounded, while the Red Army literally stood by on the outskirts of town? And the city dynamited and emptied of its population…you would never think it, looking at it now.
Across the street, inside a church, a simple and gut- wrenching memorial to the Katyn massacre victims. With a side memorial for the Smolensk plane crash of 2010, which I fail to understand. Must ask a local where they see the connection- if they do.
And what a tough people: exiled, murdered, bombed, map redrawn…yet they rebuilt splendidly from the rubble while still dirt- poor and were the first to put up meaningful nonviolent resistance to the Soviets back in 1980. And had free elections as soon as they could.
Swinoujscie – Swinemünde had public exhibits around town about their common history with Germany, bilingual. A strongly German city which was bombed flat 55% for being a naval base. No mention of the pre-war German population in Warsaw, though…
The Warsaw “Stalin cake” / Palace of Culture and Science is still on the grounds of the Jewish ghetto. That uprising was in 1943. A few meters of markings on the ground to show where its outer wall once stood. That is all.

meine rede

ATTITUDE, EMPATHY AND SO ON
Martin Winter

People are trying to get by everywhere. First World vs. Third World (or Second World) creates issues of privilege. Just like different kinds of background, experience, heritage make for issues of disconnect within a common country or region. Why are people stupid enough to vote for or even work with racist rightist arseholes in Hitler-spawning Austria? Austria-Hungary-Germany whatever? My friends in China try to get by. Like people everywhere. Some get to express how they detest the state they are in. Some more than others. Like people anywhere, more or less. Some have their audience, as famous poets or fiction writers. Yes, things have improved very much in Taiwan, and in China there is the same repression going on in some ways. Yes, everyone is taking part more or less, including foreigners. All in all, foreign media is a good influence. Most of it. Everywhere probably, in every country, reporting from any outsider’s stance or background can be very refreshing. I was privileged in Taiwan and in China, in Eastern Europe, even in America. On the other hand, I am in between. Every day I talk and work with people and texts from different worlds. It’s a great life, all in all.


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