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MYSTERIOUS DEATH – 木匠 Mu Jiang

9月 22, 2021

Mu Jiang
MYSTERIOUS DEATH

Huangshuigou reservoir in late spring,
green grass in a thick mat, wild flowers bloom.
Trees growing all over.
Fish in the reservoir
swim back and forth as they please.
A kingfisher has stuck its long beak
all the way into
the reservoir message board,
ending its life,
leaving it hanging
in an elegant way
over that sign.

4/13/21
Translated by Martin Winter in Sept. 2021

新世纪诗典作品联展#木匠#(4.0)

伊沙推荐语:好极了,很有艺术性,在这个半月的推荐诗中属于上乘之作。虽然才4.0,木匠在语言上和艺术性上的才华是明晃晃的,这么适合写诗的人如果不写诗,那就太可惜了。本典最重要的使命,就是防止这种人才浪费,雪中送炭第一,锦上添花第二。

况禹点评《新诗典》木匠《翠鸟死亡之谜》:物哀之诗。读的时候我也伴随着诗句的推进在问——翠鸟到底是因为什么走向了死亡呢?本诗没有回答。诗在大多数时候都是这样的,主要负责提醒读者注意,有没有一个固定答案,倒不打紧。

黎雪梅读《新世纪诗典》之木匠《翠鸟死亡之谜》:在一个环境如此优美,食物丰富并适合翠鸟繁衍生息的好地方,“一只翠鸟,细长的鸟喙/深深地扎进/水库公示牌/以决绝的方式/结束了它的生命”,这只翠鸟死得如此惨烈,是自杀还是意外?的确是个谜。环境的美好与翠鸟的惨死,给人强烈地视觉冲击,“并把自己/漂亮地/悬挂在了公示牌上”,“漂亮”一词将又将视觉上的刺激上升到了心灵层面:死得再漂亮,怎么比得上活得漂亮?好死远不如赖活,这是源于所有生命体求生的本能。虽然人鸟殊途,但读完此诗仍不免会有一丝淡淡的伤感。

晏非跟读《新世纪诗典》|2021.9.22木匠《翠鸟死亡之谜》
这是一首悬疑诗,有着事实的诗意。诗题指明是翠鸟之死,翠鸟为什么要赴死?诗人不是福尔摩斯,没必要去破案,破案是读者的事儿。呈现在我们眼前的是一幅充满生机的画面,暮春,绿草,野花,林木,鱼儿,清澈可见的流水,这样的美,与死亡可以无关。但悲剧还是发生了,翠鸟一头撞向了水库的公示牌。鸟类的行为有着一定的必然性,查阅资料,对这一案件现场分析,极有可能是,翠鸟一头撞向的是蓝天,那个水库公示牌一般都是蓝色的,或者是蓝天背景的,也就是说,翠鸟误将水库公示牌当成了天空!她以为自己飞往的是蓝天,实际上飞向了死亡!我当然知道,一首诗的意义可以不凭借任何一种阐释而存在,但这样一种阐释依然具有意义,那就是人与自然、人与万物相处之道,如何设计得更加具有常识,如何尽可能减少误判,比如这块人类创设的公示牌,作为极有可能引发翠鸟冲动的元凶,本身也是无辜的。

马金山|读木匠的诗《翠鸟死亡之谜》的十一条:
1、诗意在诗之外;
2、回到内心,就是回到了诗内;
3、木匠,本名王春云,女,70后,2020年开始学写口语诗;
4、今年六月份,绵阳诗会见到过木匠一面,给人留下的印象,一位知性优雅的女性,且不泛四川人的地域爽朗气质,倍觉坦然自若;
5、木匠的诗,在口语化的表达里面,透视出深刻的人生感受,无不契合着女性的柔韧度与真情流露,日常而又绵延出语言的紧密,且不泛事物的意味;
6、本诗在一幕幕鲜活的生活场景与死亡之间,将凸显触感的场景一个又一个地呈现出来,细腻入微的味道,让人既熟悉而又充满活力;
7、在读本诗的时候,我把它分成了三个层面,这样既有助于对诗本身的理解,更加有助于感受诗;
8、第一个即是水库周边环境的呈现,是一个个画面的演绎,是一个又一个镜头的推进,让人耳目一新;
9、而第二个则是对一只鸟的阐述,并由此联系到关于死亡的话题,并将第三个底片亮了出来,尤为深刻;
10、本诗给予诗人的启示:“事物的细腻描述,是诗的另一种极致”;
11、画面之诗,场景之诗,生命之诗。

Picture by Huang Kaibing

Picture by Huang Kaibing

FLASCHENPOST – 唐突 Tang Tu

4月 6, 2021

Tang Tu
FLASCHENPOST

Wellen schieben
eine Flasche aus Glas
zu mir an den Strand.

Ich denk mir,
in dieser schwimmenden Flasche
könnte ein Brief sein.

Ich mach sie auf,
es sind viele weiße Tabletten
und eine Anleitung.

Amisulprid,
ein Mittel gegen Kognitionsstörungen
und gegen Schizophrenie.

„Ich bin gerettet!“,
ruf ich und
hüpfe vor Freude.

27. Januar 2021
Übersetzt von MW im April 2021

新世纪诗典作品联展#唐突#(19.0)

 

伊沙:《新世纪诗典》第十一季第一个半月亚军之作。荒诞诗。毋须讳言,唐诗是中国最不像50后的50后诗人,即意识、感觉、方法最先进的50后诗人,他和下三代人一起玩一起成长。他的存在,让50后全面显土显旧。

况禹点评《新诗典》唐突《漂流瓶》:非常高级的一首。既是写实,也是超验;既是个人视角,也蕴涵了共通的体验。

黎雪梅读《新世纪诗典》之唐突《漂流瓶》:明明是一首荒诞之诗,读来却觉得无比真实,丝毫没有违和感,也许因为我们所处的这个世界,比我们想象的更为荒诞吧。诗中亦真亦幻的场景,让人分不清真与假、是与非,既无界限也无鸿沟,或许根本无需去进行区分,它们之间本来并无差别;也许在荒谬的世界之中才能看清世界真实的本质,在这种荒诞的超越中,也可以获得生命的欢乐和自由,如诗的结尾处所写:“有救了/我竟然/蹦起来欢呼”,不仅没有对深信不疑的世界提出质疑,也没有失去对生活的信心和对这个世界的热爱。从而说明荒诞既是存在的本质,也是存在的意义。

Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing

Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing

 

 

 

 

 

 

SCHUSSSTRICH

4月 17, 2017

IN CHRISTLICHEN LÄNDERN

in christlichen ländern
hat man das allerschlimmste gesehen
jesus und seine jünger
feierten den letzten seder
dann wurden sie vergast & verbrannt
keiner ist auferstanden
außer manche
in der erinnerung

MW Karsamstag/ Osternacht 2017

 

 

SCHUSSSTRICH

manchmal hört man
manche meinen
man solle einen schlussstrich ziehen
es gibt umfragen
was kann man alles ziehen im leben?
das schaffnerlos?

was kann man ziehen
vor der vernichtung
nach der vernichtung
vor der vernichtung
schussstriche könnte man ziehen
linien

MW Karsamstag/ Osternacht

 

 

 

BOTSCHAFT

die botschaft von ostern
ist fürchtet euch nicht
singt und freut euch
sagt es weiter
etwas ist stärker
als alle macht
als alle staatlichen wächter
fürchtet euch nicht

MW Ostern 2017

TEMPLE OF HEAVEN – 侯馬

6月 2, 2016

Hou Ma

Hou Ma
TEMPLE OF HEAVEN

at the echo wall of the temple of heaven
he told everything
what he wanted to say to the old man in heaven
what he wanted to say to his wife and kids
what he wanted to say to himself
told it all to the wall

actually he didn’t tell anything
to the wall
what he shouted was:
—- can you hear me?
—- can you hear me?

9/23/15
Tr. MW, January 2016

Hou Ma
HIMMELSTEMPEL

An der Echowand am Himmelstempel
hat er alles gesagt
was er Gott sagen wollte
was er seiner Familie sagen wollte
was er sich selbst sagen wollte
er hat alles erzählt

Eigentlich hat er der Wand
überhaupt nichts erzählt
er hat nur gerufen:
— Hörst du mich?
— Hörst du mich?

23. September 2015
Übersetzt von MW im Januar 2016

Hou Ma Himmelstempel

MISSED – 馬非 – VERPASST

5月 17, 2016

ma fei small

Ma Fei
MISSED

This summer in Xiaozhai in Xi’an,
on a pedestrian bridge.
A friend from college,
my former girlfriend,
she took my picture but didn’t know it.
Only later she went through her mobile.
She sent it to me, then I realized,
we had been there at the same time,
but missed each other.
She took a photograph of a beggar,
I was in there by accident.
You can see on the photo,
I passed the beggar,
gave him no money.

2015
Tr. MW, 2016

 

Ma Fei
VERPASST

im grad erst vergangenen sommer
xiaozhai in xi’an, eine fussgängerbrücke
dort hat mich meine frühere freundin
und studienkollegin fotografiert
sie hat es zuerst nicht gewusst
später in ihrem handy hat sie mich entdeckt
mir das foto geschickt dann habs ich erst gewusst
wir waren gleichzeitig am selben ort
und haben uns ausgerechnet verpasst
sie hat einen bettler fotografiert
mich dabei zufällig auch aufgenommen
auf dem foto sieht man
ich geh an dem bettler vorüber
und geb ihm kein geld

2016
Übersetzt von MW, 2016

Ma Fei missed

WARSAW

8月 3, 2015

Warsaw bicycleWARSAW

the eagle is not beautiful
the shadow of the eagle is
they have a chapel for Katyn
across from uprising square
the uprising was very brave
they won at first
the Red Army was there
just across the river
but the Red Army waited
then the Germans came back
they razed Warsaw City
the Red Army waited
that was in 1944
before that was the Ghetto
the Ghetto uprising
Stalin’ s culture palace stands in its place
in the place of the Ghetto
Katyn
was in 1940
tens of thousands of Polish officers
killed by Soviet intelligence
Ukrainians too
they have a chapel for Katyn
across from Uprising Square
tens of thousands of names
and a beautiful eagle
they say
I like its shadow

MW July 2015

Warsaw eagle
SUNSHINE IN WARSAW
Jacqueline Winter

A beautiful summer morning. Biking through the historical center. The bike return station is next to the monument of the 1944 uprising against the Nazis. HOW many dead and wounded, while the Red Army literally stood by on the outskirts of town? And the city dynamited and emptied of its population…you would never think it, looking at it now.
Across the street, inside a church, a simple and gut- wrenching memorial to the Katyn massacre victims. With a side memorial for the Smolensk plane crash of 2010, which I fail to understand. Must ask a local where they see the connection- if they do.
And what a tough people: exiled, murdered, bombed, map redrawn…yet they rebuilt splendidly from the rubble while still dirt- poor and were the first to put up meaningful nonviolent resistance to the Soviets back in 1980. And had free elections as soon as they could.
Swinoujscie – Swinemünde had public exhibits around town about their common history with Germany, bilingual. A strongly German city which was bombed flat 55% for being a naval base. No mention of the pre-war German population in Warsaw, though…
The Warsaw “Stalin cake” / Palace of Culture and Science is still on the grounds of the Jewish ghetto. That uprising was in 1943. A few meters of markings on the ground to show where its outer wall once stood. That is all.

meine rede

ATTITUDE, EMPATHY AND SO ON
Martin Winter

People are trying to get by everywhere. First World vs. Third World (or Second World) creates issues of privilege. Just like different kinds of background, experience, heritage make for issues of disconnect within a common country or region. Why are people stupid enough to vote for or even work with racist rightist arseholes in Hitler-spawning Austria? Austria-Hungary-Germany whatever? My friends in China try to get by. Like people everywhere. Some get to express how they detest the state they are in. Some more than others. Like people anywhere, more or less. Some have their audience, as famous poets or fiction writers. Yes, things have improved very much in Taiwan, and in China there is the same repression going on in some ways. Yes, everyone is taking part more or less, including foreigners. All in all, foreign media is a good influence. Most of it. Everywhere probably, in every country, reporting from any outsider’s stance or background can be very refreshing. I was privileged in Taiwan and in China, in Eastern Europe, even in America. On the other hand, I am in between. Every day I talk and work with people and texts from different worlds. It’s a great life, all in all.


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