Posts Tagged ‘high school’
8月 12, 2022
Ma Lixia
DIE KLEINE STRASSE
Auf meinem Schulweg ist eine kleine Straße,
ohne Licht, ohne Häuser, still und entlegen.
Wo viele wilde Hunde wohnen.
In der Volksschule denk ich, in der Mittelschule wirds besser.
In der Mittelschule denk ich, in der Oberstufe wirds besser!
In der Oberstufe möcht ich zurück auf die kleine Straße!
In der Oberstufe lassen sich Papa und Mama scheiden,
ich bin umgezogen!
Übersetzt von MW im August 2022
伊沙推荐语：真好！其实这是一首好的抒情诗。好在哪里？意思并不复杂，也是别人说了多遍的意思，但是说得新鲜，带着一股子清新之气。这是我《现代诗写作》课第二届第18首入典诗，换作是你，恐怕成就感不来都不成。
况禹点评《新诗典》马丽霞《那条小路》:读到最后，让人揪心。什么心?“情同此心”的“心”。本诗的特点是忠于情感体验，写得老实。有些资深作者一意识到题材的情感优势，就忍不住扯犊子、膨化词语(新诗或喊着口语万岁的浑语作者皆易如此)，本诗的这种老实写法，尤其值得大家思考。
标签：country, countryside, divorce, emotion, 马丽霞, family, father, high school, Ma Lixia, memory, middle school, mother, NPC, parents, paths, people, primary school, roads, school, schools, streets, time, walking, 新世纪詩典
发表在 2000s, 2010s, 2020s, 2022, 20th century, 21st century, August 2022, Middle Ages, NPC, poetry, Translations, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
2月 17, 2021
You Ruoxin
MY OWN POETRY
In my review material
is a Beijing middle school essay topic,
writing it
feels like a poem,
just about 20 lines.
I am very glad,
this isn’t easy to get.
Makes me think,
even if middle school exams in Fujian
let you
write poetry,
maybe I would be worse off.
Wouldn’t get even one point,
could be.
Because here down south,
teachers love
Ah …
Ahh …
That kind of poetry.
1/17/21
Translated by Martin Winter in February 2021
伊沙：本诗所写多么真实！梦回唐朝又如何？考诗是真，平仄对仗，李白即使上考场，也是落第的命。古往今来，大诗人不是考出来的。大年初七，有请90、00、10三代诗人中总推荐数最高的游若昕向典中这三代”年轻诗人”拜年！
况禹点评《新诗典》游若昕《我写的诗》：照片里的若昕一天比一天大，诗也在随着稳步推进，而且一直保持着高标准。是什么样的环境和教育，导致我国的青少年对诗歌的认识自动分成两个阵营（广大的新诗八股思维和小众的自由精英思维）？这个大问题限于篇幅，在此不做讨论。本诗触及的是另一个大话题——在以上大背景下年轻作者的自我身份确认——带着孤独和源于天赋的骄傲
黎雪梅读《新世纪诗典》之游若昕《我写的诗》：本诗如实道出了口语诗的现状。以前中考作文题目都会有“体裁不限，诗歌除外”的要求，近几年虽有所改观，允许写诗歌，但写诗歌的学生依然寥寥无几，因为会写的学生太少了。偶尔有几个能写出来的也纯粹是为了应付考试，还要符合老师们眼中诗的样子：满篇“啊啊啊”地空洞抒情，意象也无非是蓝天白云外加青草和花朵，毫无新意可言。教师对诗歌的认知和审美尚且如此，更不要说学生了。所以口语诗的前景可以说是“道阻且长”，还需要同仁们继续努力，写出更多更好、经得起岁月考验的作品，才能让我们的诗路走得更高更远。
Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing
Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing
Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing
张小云：读游若昕《我写的诗》
“我想”vs“啊……”
“转念一想”vs“啊……”
理性思惟的思辨的vs随情绪而发的
可以后者吗？当然可以
但后者诸类生灵共有
前者却惟人独有
本就思惟而言便见高下
假使平等视之那岂能全倾“阿”派
游若昕碰到的作文题
触及所谓五千年文明地盘
必须面对
却少有人思考的重大课题
在物质化功用至上形而下主导的时代
更当珍惜和开发世人正在遗弃的
大脑处理器与心性共同作用
所具备的宝藏
谢谢游若昕提供了如此别有的
“诗考”
2021.2.17
标签：country, culture, essays, exams, expression, feeling, feelings, freedom of expression, high school, language, middle school, NPC, people, poetry, province, region, school, score, style, thinking, writing, You Ruoxin, 新世纪詩典, 游若昕
发表在 2020, 2021, 20th century, 21st century, February 2021, January 2021, Middle Ages, NPC, poetry, Translations, 新世纪诗典, 游若昕 | Leave a Comment »
1月 10, 2021
He Lianjin
SHAOLING YUAN (wo Du Fu gewohnt hat)
Ich wollte den Aufsatzwettbewerb
„Shaoling-Cup“ nennen.
Hab grad erst den Mund aufgemacht,
da hat die Direktorin
den Vorschlag schon scharf zurückgewiesen.
Sie meint,
obwohl die Schule auf dem Shaoling Yuan stehe,
少陵 „Shaoling“, diese zwei Zeichen
hätten viel zu wenig Inhalt.
Mehrere Mittelschullehrer stimmen ihr zu.
Übersetzt von MW im Januar 2020
伊沙推荐: 本诗写的是杜甫的孤独－是的，他所承受的孤独是万古的。出自于小我二十届的北师大师弟之手，这所鲁迅执教过的学校的文学基因，还在以让人意想不到的方式传承。
况禹点评《新诗典》赫连今《少陵原》：少陵野老和青莲居士一样，都是文学史上脍炙人口的伟大诗人的自号。老师知道杜甫的号，学生自然也就跟着知道了。但这不能老师的领导和同事们也知道。“外行领导内行”是内地特有的奇葩现象，提供了多少带泪的喜感。
Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing
标签：Du Fu, education, 赫连今, He Lianjin, high school, history, learning, literature, memory, NPC, people, poetry, school, teachers, 新世纪詩典, 杜甫
发表在 2020, 2021, 20th century, 21st century, Antique times, December 2020, Han dynasty, January 2021, Middle Ages, NPC, poetry, Tang Dynasty, Translations, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
11月 21, 2020
Wu Cheng
STUPSEN
Unser Herr Schuldirektor leitet in der Elterngruppe
Aufnahmeregeln weiter,
nach dem „1+3“ – Kultivieren-Experiment.
Da passiert mir,
dass ich seinen Kopf doppelklicke.
In der Gruppe erscheint:
„Ich habe Direktor Wang angestupst.“
Peinlich!
Ein anderer Elternteil
stupst ebenfalls Direktor Wang an.
Nacheinander stupsen
über 30 Erziehungsberechtigte
Herrn Direktor Wang an.
Übersetzt von MW im Oktober 2020
标签：admission, cultivation, director, exams, experiment, high school, middle school, NPC, parents, people, poke, poking, pupils, schools, social media, students, Wu Cheng, 新世纪詩典, 乌城
发表在 2010s, 2020, 20th century, 21st century, August 2020, Middle Ages, NOVEMBER 2020, NPC, OCTOBER 2020, poetry, September 2020, Translations, Welcome!, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
5月 11, 2020
He Jin
1977
It was a beautiful time,
it was a fucking bad time.
We supposed-to-be-educated youths went off to exams
and more than half fell through.
If I had managed to fill in those two blanks,
I would have survived.
Who was Cao Xueqin?
Who was Qin Keqing?
Forward to now, Cao wrote Dream of the Red Chamber, everyone knows.
Qin Keqing, she’s one of 12 beauties
in the mystery novel,
the one most tight with Sister Feng.
In that blank space,
I drew a cow turd.
In the space for Cao Xueqin, because I was mad,
I wrote he was the third little girl
of old Cao
in our backyard.
2/10/20
Translated by MW, May 2020
He Jin, orig. name Jin Weixin, Muslim Hui nationality, born in the last lunar month of 1956. Published a story collection, one book of poetry and one book of essays. Poems and stories appeared in anthologies. In January 2018 he founded the poetry magazine Xiao Shi Jie (Small Verse World). He lives in Jilin city. 《新诗典》小档案：何金，原名金伟信，回族，1956年腊月出生。著有小说集《沉默的星空》、诗集《身体的宣言》、随笔集《平民天堂》。作品收入《中国口语诗年鉴》（2019年卷）、《中国回族文学通史·当代卷》。2018年1月创办《小诗界》诗刊，现居吉林市。
标签：Cultural Revolution, culture, dreams, exams, feelings, He Jin, high school, history, intellect, intellectuals, knowledge, literature, memory, novels, NPC, people, school, stories, tradition, University, youth, 新世纪詩典, 何金
发表在 18th century, 1950s, 1956, 1960s, 1970s, 1977, 1980s, 1990s, 2000, 2000s, 2010s, 2020, 20th century, 21st century, Antique times, April 2020, February 2020, May 2020, Middle Ages, NPC, poetry, prose, Translations, Uncategorized, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
中国大好き 