Posts Tagged ‘province’
二月 17, 2021
You Ruoxin
MY OWN POETRY
In my review material
is a Beijing middle school essay topic,
writing it
feels like a poem,
just about 20 lines.
I am very glad,
this isn’t easy to get.
Makes me think,
even if middle school exams in Fujian
let you
write poetry,
maybe I would be worse off.
Wouldn’t get even one point,
could be.
Because here down south,
teachers love
Ah …
Ahh …
That kind of poetry.
1/17/21
Translated by Martin Winter in February 2021
伊沙：本诗所写多么真实！梦回唐朝又如何？考诗是真，平仄对仗，李白即使上考场，也是落第的命。古往今来，大诗人不是考出来的。大年初七，有请90、00、10三代诗人中总推荐数最高的游若昕向典中这三代”年轻诗人”拜年！
况禹点评《新诗典》游若昕《我写的诗》：照片里的若昕一天比一天大，诗也在随着稳步推进，而且一直保持着高标准。是什么样的环境和教育，导致我国的青少年对诗歌的认识自动分成两个阵营（广大的新诗八股思维和小众的自由精英思维）？这个大问题限于篇幅，在此不做讨论。本诗触及的是另一个大话题——在以上大背景下年轻作者的自我身份确认——带着孤独和源于天赋的骄傲
黎雪梅读《新世纪诗典》之游若昕《我写的诗》：本诗如实道出了口语诗的现状。以前中考作文题目都会有“体裁不限，诗歌除外”的要求，近几年虽有所改观，允许写诗歌，但写诗歌的学生依然寥寥无几，因为会写的学生太少了。偶尔有几个能写出来的也纯粹是为了应付考试，还要符合老师们眼中诗的样子：满篇“啊啊啊”地空洞抒情，意象也无非是蓝天白云外加青草和花朵，毫无新意可言。教师对诗歌的认知和审美尚且如此，更不要说学生了。所以口语诗的前景可以说是“道阻且长”，还需要同仁们继续努力，写出更多更好、经得起岁月考验的作品，才能让我们的诗路走得更高更远。
Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing
Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing
Calligraphy by Huang Kaibing
张小云：读游若昕《我写的诗》
“我想”vs“啊……”
“转念一想”vs“啊……”
理性思惟的思辨的vs随情绪而发的
可以后者吗？当然可以
但后者诸类生灵共有
前者却惟人独有
本就思惟而言便见高下
假使平等视之那岂能全倾“阿”派
游若昕碰到的作文题
触及所谓五千年文明地盘
必须面对
却少有人思考的重大课题
在物质化功用至上形而下主导的时代
更当珍惜和开发世人正在遗弃的
大脑处理器与心性共同作用
所具备的宝藏
谢谢游若昕提供了如此别有的
“诗考”
2021.2.17
标签：country, culture, essays, exams, expression, feeling, feelings, freedom of expression, high school, language, middle school, NPC, people, poetry, province, region, school, score, style, thinking, writing, You Ruoxin, 新世纪詩典, 游若昕
发表在 2020, 2021, 20th century, 21st century, February 2021, January 2021, Middle Ages, NPC, poetry, Translations, 新世纪诗典, 游若昕 | Leave a Comment »
三月 9, 2020
Hu Jieyang
LANDSTREICHER
Herkunft Dongbei, Mandschurei.
Geboren in Hubei,
Arbeit in Hebei.
Zum Mondneujahr in Dongbei, in der Mandschurei.
Bei der Rückkehr zur Arbeit in Hebei
wegen der Papiere aus Hubei
nach Hubei deportiert,
auf der Straße gelandet.
2020-02-21
Übersetzt von MW im März 2020
标签：birth, country, deportation, disease, Dongbei, 胡洁洋, family, health, Hebei, Hu Jieyang, Hubei, land, lunar calendar, Manchuria, new year, NPC, papers, people, province, rules, virus, work, Wuhan, 新世纪詩典
发表在 2000, 2000s, 2003, 2010s, 2020, 20th century, 21st century, February 2020, January 2020, March 2020, Middle Ages, NPC, poetry, Translations, Uncategorized, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
一月 18, 2018
Zhu Jian
PASTA
Went back to Hunan in early August,
to change my family registration,
so I can officially live in Xi’an.
Ran into an old guy from my clan,
who said, kid,
this time you rip out your roots when you go.
In Xi’an first day back
for my first meal, walked into
Great Leap’s Spinach Noodle House,
oil-sprinkled pasta.
Local people call them
Soul Returns Home.
2017-08-10
Translated by MW, January 2018
面
朱剑
八月初回湖南老家
正式将我的户口
迁到了陕西西安
家中一位长辈说
你这伢子
这下就算连根走喽
返回西安当天
第一顿饭是去
跃进手工菠菜面馆
吃了碗油泼面
老陕管这
叫回魂面
（2017年8月10日）
면
주검
8월 초에 湖南성에 있는 고향으로 돌아가
정식으로 나의 호적을
陕西성 西安에 이적하였다
집안 어른 한 분이 말했다
너 이놈, 괘씸하구려
인젠 뿌리까지 뽑아 가져가
西安으로 돌아 온 당일
첫 식사는
跃进 오리지널 시금치 면점에 들러
油泼면을 한 그릇 먹었다
섬서 사람들은
이것을 回魂면이라 부른다
（2017年8月10日）
(韩) 郭美兰 (美) 洪君植
标签：ancestors, city, family, food, Great Leap, history, home, hunger, memory, names, noodles, people, poetry, province, spinach, tradition, Zhu Jian, 新世纪诗典, 朱剑
发表在 AUGUST 2017, January 2018, NPC, poetry, Translations, Uncategorized, 新世纪诗典, 朱剑 | Leave a Comment »
十二月 12, 2017
Li Qi
SO THIS IS TIME
So this is time.
Seems I have done only three things.
Finished my studies, brought up my children, made myself old.
When I was young, I thought of traveling round the world.
Today, I haven’t even seen
much of my province.
I’ve paid a price, a simple price.
Salt in sweat, bitter taste in tears.
Also flowers in smiles.
I and my years, we consumed each other,
records are clear to see.
Three things
haven’t changed very much.
Loving poetry, attachment to family.
And also truth, speaking of truth.
Deep in your soul, hard to keep still.
Translated by MW in December 2017
标签：age, children, country, family, geography, Li Qi, life, NPC, poetry, price, province, speech, studies, taste, time, travel, truth, women, world, years, 新世紀詩典, 李琦
发表在 20th century, 21st century, December 2017, NPC, poetry, Translations, Uncategorized, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
九月 19, 2015
Lan Du
OLD HOME
they talk about where their families come from
some from Shaanxi
some from Henan
or Yuannan or Sichuan.
Most come from Jiangsu.
When they ask me, I say Gansu.
Some person asks if it is a district in Shaanxi
Some shake their heads
they simply don’t know
later, finally someone says
they had an earthquake this year
as soon as he says it
the earth trembles again in my heart.
2013-09-28
Tr. MW, 2015
标签：catastrophies, china, country, earthquake, 蓝毒, family, Gansu, heritage, home, Lan Du, place, poetry, province, speech, talk, 新世纪诗典
发表在 poetry, September 2013, September 2015, Translations, Uncategorized, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
