Posts Tagged ‘eggs’
六月 7, 2021
Zhang Jingcheng
LEUTE AUF DEM LAND
In der Pandemiezeit hab ich was nachgeholt,
die Fernsehserie “Zaun, Frau und Hund“.
Da gibt es den alten Mao Yuan,
der tätschelt seinen Hennen den Hintern
und sagt, heute werden sechs Eier gelegt.
Er hat das Gefühl und die Erfahrung.
Meine Oma hat es genau so gemacht.
Wie viele Eier die Hennen jeden Tag legen,
sie hat es gewusst.
Wenn die Eier mehr waren,
hat sie gewusst, die kommen vom Nachbarn,
da hat die Henne ins falsche Nest gelegt.
Dann ist sie getrippelt mit kleinen Füßen
und hat das Ei hingebracht.
2020-03-28
Übersetzt von MW im Juni 2021
伊沙推荐：实话实说，4.4云诗会上，面对本诗，我犹豫了五秒，为什么？因为它写得不聪明，本诗之亮点在于摸鸡有数的生活质感，你不必告知我灵感从哪儿来，在什么期间，这是口语诗中的口水部分，像日记，像原材料。有些口语诗人觉悟（或者丧心病狂故意为之）：口语诗不是另有标准，口语诗的标准仍是诗的标准。
况禹点评《新诗典》张敬成《乡村人家》：生活感很足。从影视或其他作品得来的灵感切入，本来属于间接经验，有点吃亏。但作者很快和奶奶的记忆衔接上了，间接经验很快转轨到了直接经验，这样质感也就成立、可信了。
黎雪梅读《新世纪诗典》之张敬成《乡村人家》：艺术来源于生活，一点没错。我们在影视剧中看到的很多生活场景，你会觉得很熟悉，因为差不多都是我们生活的常态，只不过表现形式不同而已。无论是电视剧中的“茂源老汉”，还是“我奶奶”，都是乡村人家的典型代表，是带给我们艺术创作灵感的钥匙。诗中洋溢的淳朴的民风，浓厚的乡村生活气息，以及奶奶善良美好的品性，都带给人亲切自然的阅读体验。虽然诗的前半部分稍嫌冗赘，但瑕不掩瑜，仍不失为一首好诗。
马金山｜读张敬成的诗《乡村人家》的十一条：
1、诗意在于意；
2、文字是思想的体现，诗就是精神的内涵；
3、张敬成，男，1972年9月生于河南济源，中原诗歌节同仁，新诗典诗人，诗歌曾入选《佛城诗刊》等，著有散文集《暗夜明灯》、《巍巍王屋》，诗集《深夜，在路口》；
4、敬成兄在诗人和教师的身份下，又拥有了诗评者的身份，并在逐步建立一种新的平台符号，这于诗事也将是一个莫大的功德；
5、本诗的素材，具有典型的中国式风格和深刻的一代人记忆，而诗的风格则具有独特的后现代主义色彩，有章无句，却字字可触及生活的事物；
6、诗一开头，即以大疫入笔，交待出具体的历史背景，并由此延伸出生活里所有可记录的内容，即为诗质的转角；
7、尤其是诗中的“《篱笆、女人和狗》”、“鸡下几个蛋”和“小脚”，这些充满了生活质感与时代特点的印记，将细腻的情感，具体的人物形象和生活还原于生活本身；
8、而诗最后的描述，特别是“迈开小脚/给人家送去”，倾刻间将作品拔高到一定程度，不仅是对人物形象的描写，更是对人物精神层面的挖掘与呈现；
9、唯一的缺憾是，诗的前几行如果再干净，直接一点就更加好了，毕竟好的开头，是吸人眼球的基础；
10、本诗给予诗人的启示：“好的诗，洁净度是一个重要的因素之一”；
11、生活之诗，质感之诗，后现代诗。
标签：animals, chicken, country, countryside, eggs, experience, family, feeling, hens, history, knowledge, life, memory, NPC, people, tradition, Zhang Jingcheng, 张敬成, 新世纪詩典
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四月 20, 2020
Shui Yang
PROVISIONS
Most supermarkets
have just empty shelves.
Online
meat and vegetables
are hard to find.
Milk and eggs
whole wheat bread
also gone.
Turned out the freezer,
found a surprise, a few jiaozi.
That was from last fall,
mom and dad made them for us
before they went back to China.
Cooked our treasure,
carefully
tried a bite.
Carrot-celery-beef filling,
greatest stuff in the world,
never had
anything better.
3/17/20
Translated by MW, April 2020
标签：beef, bread, carrots, celery, disease, eggs, family, food, Jiaozi, meat, milk, NPC, pandemic, parents, people, poetry, shopping, Shui Yang, treasure, vegetables, virus, 新世纪詩典, 水央
发表在 2019, 2020, 20th century, 21st century, April 2020, December 2019, February 2020, January 2020, March 2020, Middle Ages, November 2019, NPC, poetry, Translations, Uncategorized, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
八月 8, 2019
Bai Li
DAMALS IM KALTEN WINTER
Damals in einer kalten Winternacht,
eisiger Wind
fegt durch die Ritzen der brüchigen Mauern.
Sie hält das Kind in seiner Decke
und streichelt die kleine magere Hand.
In der Nacht kommt ihr Mann
durch die schäbige Tür,
packt sie mit klammen Fingern und sagt voller Stolz:
Hast du Radio gehört?
Unser Land hat Atombomben!
Die Frau ruft laut mit leuchtenden Augen:
Wie viele kriegen wir dann zum Essen?
Übersetzt von MW im August 2019
标签：Bai Li, bombs, 白立, eggs, family, food, frost, history, memory, NPC, nuclear weapons, poetry, weapons, wind, winter, 新世纪詩典
发表在 1950s, 1960s, 1970s, 2000s, 2010s, 2019, 20th century, 21st century, August 2019, Middle Ages, NPC, poetry, Translations, Uncategorized, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
四月 6, 2017
Wu Cheng
1977
When I was born,
father went to the countryside to buy eggs
to nourish my mother.
On the way back
he ran into a roadblock set up by militia
who confiscated the eggs
to “cut off capitalist tails”.
Profiteering was strictly prohibited.
Father wouldn’t give up.
In that village
he looked up a distant relative,
asked him for help to get the eggs back.
The relative said
a militia man’s wife also just had her baby,
only half of the eggs could be given back.
Tr. MW, April 2017
标签：1977, buying, children, economy, eggs, family, food, history, memory, militia, nutrition, poetry, policy, politics, profit, relatives, selling, village, Wu Cheng, 新世纪诗典, 乌成
发表在 1977, 2017, April 2017, NPC, poetry, Translations, Uncategorized, 新世纪诗典 | Leave a Comment »
三月 28, 2016
HE
he is not here
for he is risen
he’s not here with us
with our eggs
in our nests
with our bunnies
maybe he is
in idomeni
somewhere on the road
let’s make austria strong
say the people
who seal the borders
MW March 2016
标签：austria, Balkan, borders, bunnies, easter, eggs, election, Europe, god, greece, hares, history, language, nests, people, poetry, politics, refugees, religion, resistance, resurrection, speech, travel, uprising
发表在 March 2016, poetry, Uncategorized, Welcome! | Leave a Comment »
六月 26, 2014
Feng Xuan
MINE WORKERS AND TEA EGGS
actually, they have
just finished their early shift
and found a noodle shop
to let their spent up bodies rest for a while
handmade noodles, two yuan fifty fen
they don’t want to pay any more for the sauce
only a tea-egg
colored much like their skin
happiness rolled into one
they keep the egg and the soup till the end
as if to remind themselves
not to let this darkness
pass into their wives’ pregnant bellies
Tr. MW, June 2014
标签：children, eggs, food, marriage, money, noodles, pasta, poetry, tea, tea eggs, work
发表在 June 2014, Uncategorized | Leave a Comment »
