11月 20, 2024
Chang Yuchun
NO INTERRUPTION
A child is killed by a bomb from the sky.
Maybe he is born again.
Maybe then he gets killed the same way.
Maybe his born-again self of his born-again self also gets bombed.
Translated by MW in November 2024
磨铁诗歌奖·2023年度最佳诗歌100首｜常遇春《无间》入选理由：随着俄乌战争的持续和巴以战争的蔓延，汉语诗歌中，与战争相关的诗也越来越多。常遇春的这首《无间》是这一题材的又一力作。这首诗写得太狠了，狠得入骨，狠得令人的心发冷成灰。并不是仅仅因为写得狠才好，而是常遇春竟然用如此轻盈和敏捷的方式实现了这种“狠”，得有多么锐利的内心，才能写出这样的效果。（磨铁读诗会 / 沈浩波）
磨铁诗歌奖·2023年度最佳诗歌100首|艾孜哈尔《钱来的路上我看到了我们的亲情》入选理由：能在诗中写出生活的质感，不容易；能在诗中写出复杂难名的情感，不容易。能将生活的质感与复杂的情感水乳交融地写出来，更是难得。艾孜哈尔出生于1999年，是一位既富有情感又富有洞察力和审视能力的年轻诗人，因此他能将情感控制在理性的范围中，控制在生活本身的质感之内。(磨铁读诗会/沈浩波)
An Yu
NORTH KOREA
Want to go!
How I want to go!
Want to go now!
Want to go immediately!
I am worried if I don’t go,
it won’t be there anymore.
Translated by MW in Nov. 2024
磨铁诗歌奖·2023年度最佳诗歌100首｜桉予《朝鲜》入选理由：公共题材如何控制在诗的范围内？如何获得社会的公共属性与文学的个人属性之间的平衡？桉予一直在这个方向努力。《朝鲜》一诗堪称范例，它首先是“诗”，然后才是一首涉及到公共题材的诗。桉予几乎做到了在一首“纯诗”中暗藏态度、立场和讥讽，令这首诗同时获得了诗本身之美和对现实的介入之重。（磨铁读诗会/沈浩波）
磨铁诗歌奖·2023年度最佳诗歌100首|柏桦《任性和理性》入选理由：好矛盾的内心，到底是该理性呢，还是任性？思想家认为任性带来灾难，那么理性会带来幸福吗？但在事实上，在诗人的亲身经历中，他的理性输给了另一个男人的任性，在任性那强大的行动力面前，诗人的理性苍白无比，哪怕到垂暮之年也会为此懊悔。诗人任性理性地思辩了半天，真的是为了说任性还是理性吗？当然不是，他只是在写一段情感，一段揪心的、懊悔的情感。这是一首抒情诗，不是一首哲理诗，诗中的思辨，不过是诗人内心懊悔的具体化呈现，呈现得非常巧妙、高超，展开了一场纠结无比、懊恼无穷的内心戏。(磨铁读诗会/沈浩波)
磨铁诗歌奖·2023年度最佳诗歌100首|摆丢《复工首日》入选理由：对于诗歌来说，好的细节有时真的就意味着一切，一切尽在其中。诗人和房东，一个去拉卷帘门，一个用头顶住卷帘门，这一拉一顶之中，既构成了生存和生活的张力，又同时正是诗歌的张力，此时诗与生活完全融为一体。摆丢的这首诗，特别生活，特别诗，特别真实，特别贴切，特别富有质感。标题叫《复工首日》，写的应该也是疫情期间的事，在所有与疫情相关的汉语诗歌中，此诗当属上佳之作。（磨铁读诗会/沈浩波）
磨铁诗歌奖·2023年度最佳诗歌100首|常旭阳《这辈子的事情》入选理由：中国的同性恋人口巨大，但同性恋题材的汉语诗歌却始终不太多，这多少有些令人费解。零零后诗人常旭阳一开始就体现出了引人注意的才华，但奇怪的是，他现在好像是同时用两个名字写诗。他用“常旭阳”这个名字写口语的，朴素而真实的，通往生活和生命本身的诗；用“阿落”这个名字写一种主流的传统抒情诗，我看过一些，写得华丽而铺排。这首《这辈子的事情》属于前者，写得真好，好在真实，而正因为真实，所以才能包含多重复杂滋味，其中有残酷，有荒诞，有令人为之叹息的无奈。（磨铁读诗会/沈浩波）
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4月 3, 2021
10 YEARS – NPC十岁了！
10 years ago, Yi Sha 伊沙 began to present one poem each day on Chinese social media. This has become a representative collection of new poetry in the new century, aptly named NPC, New Poetry Canon 新世纪诗典.
Eight years ago I began to look for NPC poems each day, translating more and more into German and English. In 2014 my own poetry appeared on NPC for the first time. After two books of Yi Sha’s poetry, I have now published, along with Juliane Adler, the first book of a 4-volume-series of NPC poetry in Chinese and German. Here are the contents:
BRETT VOLLER NÄGEL 布满钉子的木板
NPC-Anthologie 新世纪诗典
Band 1: A–J. Gedichte
Chinesisch/Deutsch
Übersetzt von Martin Winter
Herausgegeben von Juliane Adler und Martin Winter
ISBN 978-3-903267-00-8
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3月 25, 2021
BRETT VOLLER NÄGEL 布满钉子的木板
NPC-Anthologie 新世纪诗典
Band 1: A–J
NPC stands for New Poetry Canon, or New Century Poetry Canon 新世纪诗典, presented by Yi Sha 伊沙 in Chinese social media each day since spring 2011. NPC outside of poetry is National People’s Congress, China’s parliament that convenes in the Great Hall of the People in Beijing for two weeks each March. Yi Sha’s NPC poem of the day on Sina Weibo 新浪微博, Tencent WeChat 微信 and other platforms gets clicked, forwarded, commented 10,000 times or more, each day. Each year a book comes out, about every week there are events in Xi’an, Beijing and many, many places all over China and beyond. All produced independently from among the people 民间, not by any state organizations. This book contains poems by 81 poets listed below. This is the first volume (A-J) in a series of four books. Compiled and edited by Juliane Adler and Martin Winter, translated by Martin Winter.
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NPC steht für New Poetry Canon, eigentlich New Century Poetry Canon, 新世纪诗典. Abgekürzt als NPC. NPC steht sonst für National People’s Congress, also der Nationale Volkskongress, Chinas Parlament, das allerdings nur einmal im Jahr im März zwei Wochen lang zusammentritt. Seit 2011 wird von Yi Sha 伊沙 im NPC-新世纪诗典 jeden Tag ein Gedicht vorgestellt, in mehreren chinesischen sozialen Medien zugleich. Oft wird ein einziges Gedicht schon in den ersten zwei Tagen zehntausende Male angeklickt, kommentiert und weitergeleitet. Ein nationaler Poesiekongress und eine umfangreiche Studie der heutigen Gesellschaft. Band 1 präsentiert 81 Autorinnen und Autoren. Wird fortgesetzt.
Cover/Umschlag etc: Neue Arche von Kuang Biao 邝飚 und 3 Grafiken von: An Qi 安琪
Autorinnen und Autoren:
A Ti 阿嚏, A Wen 阿文, A Wu 阿吾, A Yu 阿煜, AAA (3A) 三个A, Ai Hao 艾蒿, Ai Mi 艾米, An Qi 安琪, Ao Yuntao 敖运涛, Bai Diu 摆丢, Bai Li 白立, Bei Dao 北岛, Bei Lang 北浪, Benben S. K. 笨笨. S. K, Cai Xiyin 蔡喜印, Caiwong Namjack 才旺南杰, Caomu Xin 草木心, Cha Wenjin 查文瑾, Chang Yuchun 常遇春, Chao Hui 朝晖, Che Qianzi 车前子, Chen Moshi 陈默实, Chen Yanqiang 陈衍强, Chen Yulun 陈玉伦, Chen Yunfeng 陈云峰, Cheng Bei 成倍, Cheng Tao 程涛, Chun Sue 春树, Cong Rong 从容, Da Duo 大朵, Da You 大友, Dai Guanglei 代光磊, Dechen Pakme 德乾恒美, Denis Mair 梅丹理, Di Guanglong 第广龙, Dong Yue 东岳, Du Qin 独禽, Du Sishang 杜思尚, Du Zhongmin 杜中民, Duo Er 朵儿, Eryue Lan 二月蓝, Ezher 艾孜哈尔, Fa Xing 发星, Fei Qin 秦菲, Feng Xuan 冯谖, Gang Jumu 冈居木, Gao Ge 高歌, Geng Zhankun 耿占坤, Gong Zhijian 龚志坚, Gongzi Qin 公子琹, Gu Juxiu 谷驹休, Guangtou 光头, Gui Shi 鬼石, Hai An 海岸, Hai Jing 海菁, Hai Qing 海青, Han Dong 韩东, Han Jingyuan 韩敬源, Han Yongheng 韩永恒, Hong Junzhi 洪君植, Hou Ma 侯马，Houhou Jing 后后井, Hu Bo 胡泊, Hu Zanhui 胡赞辉, Huang Hai 黄海, Huang Kaibing 黄开兵, Huang Lihai 黃禮孩, Huang Xiang 黄翔, Hung Hung 鴻鴻, Huzi 虎子, Ji Yanfeng 纪彦峰, Jian Tianping 簡天平, Jiang Caiyun 蒋彩云, Jiang Erman 姜二嫚, Jiang Rui 江睿, Jiang Tao 蔣濤, Jiang Xinhe 姜馨贺, Jiang Xuefeng 蔣雪峰, Jianghu Hai 江湖海, Jin Shan 金山, Jun Er 君儿
BRETT VOLLER NÄGEL 布满钉子的木板 NPC-Anthologie 新世纪诗典 Band 1: A–J
Die chinesischen Gedichte sind hauptsächlich erschienen in:
NPC 新世纪诗典 1-6，伊沙 编选 著，磨铁图书 (Xiron), Zhejiang People‘s Publishing 浙江人民出版社, Bände 1-6, herausgegeben von Yi Sha. Hangzhou 2012-2018
NPC 新世纪诗典 7，伊沙 编选 著，磨铁图书 (Xiron), China Youth Publishing 中国青年出版社, Band 7, herausgegeben von Yi Sha. Beijing 2018
NPC 新世纪诗典 8，伊沙 编选 著，磨铁图书 (Xiron), China Friendship Publishing 中国友谊出版公司, Band 8, herausgegeben von Yi Sha. Beijing 2020
Die restlichen Texte stammen aus Internetquellen (Soziale Medien: Sina Weibo, Tencent Weixin etc.) mit freundlicher Genehmigung der Autorinnen und Autoren. Die Texte aus 2019 und 2020-2021 werden in den Büchern NPC 9 und 10 erscheinen.
BRETT VOLLER NÄGEL 布满钉子的木板 NPC-Anthologie 新世纪诗典 Band 1: A–J
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1月 12, 2021
Ezher
WENN
Könnte ich wählen,
hätt‘ ich ein Haus mit einem Holzzaun rundherum,
bisschen Boden anbauen, Hühner füttern.
An einem bedeckten Tag, wie ichs gern hab,
sie macht Esssen, ich mit einem Bruder,
wir liegen im Lehnstuhl, beim Schachspiel.
Könnte ich wählen,
wär‘ ich das Unkraut bei meiner Oma,
wär‘ eine Fliege,
aber nicht so lästig,
würd‘ mich verstecken in einer Ecke,
still auf den Tod warten.
Könnte ich wählen,
möchte ich nicht Ezher sein.
Ich wäre gern Rustem, Si Tunan aus „Renegade Immortal“
oder Zhou Yi aus demselben Roman.
Übersetzt von MW im Januar 2020
Ezher, geb. 1999 in Bortala, Xinjiang. Uighur. Schreibt seit 2019 Gedichte auf Chinesisch. Studiert in Beijing, liebt Musik. 《新诗典》小档案：艾孜哈尔，一九九九年生，维吾尔族，新疆博乐人。二零一九年尝试汉语写作，作品见于《白夜谭》《磨铁读诗会》。现在北京上学，喜欢听音乐。
伊沙：与西娃、里所电聊：现在江湖上最蠢的就是在《新诗典》和磨铁读诗会之间还要私造对立自觉选边站的货，他们以为自己可以选择的生存空间很大吗？本诗作者刚在磨铁那边冒头，马上便将诗投过来，这便是聪明＋健康人的正确作法，刚好我又很喜欢，认为作者在诗歌创作上大有前途。
况禹点评《新诗典》艾孜哈尔《如果》：人生有诸多愿景，人类有太多种愿景，不是每个都能实现，但如果你是个写作者，你可以把它们都写出来。
高歌：唯一认识的维族歌手是洪启，现在认识了第一位维族诗人艾孜哈尔，他却不想做维族人吗？末节够沉重，也许是周知的原因。2020年我想要一座磨铁的小猫人，未遂，新的一年继续努力，哈哈哈……
黎雪梅读《新世纪诗典》之艾孜哈尔《如果》：人们总是对现实的世界有太多的不满，为了达到某种心理平衡，就会产生各种各样不切实际的“如果”，以这些假设来弥补心中的缺憾。如果真的可以重新选择，人生也许会如诗中所写，少一些遗憾，多一些幸福。只可惜人生没有彩排，每天都是现场直播；人生也没有如果，只有结果和后果。因为命运无法假设。既然无法选择，那么只有面对现实，过好当下，以避免产生更多的遗憾，才是明智的选择。不管是怎样的人生，只要自己尽了最大的努力，就该无怨无悔，就无需“如果”，曾经的和以后的都没有“假设”。
马金山｜读艾孜哈尔的诗《如果》的十一条：
1、每一首诗，都是诗人的内心，还是灵魂流泻出来的光，一股神秘的力量之光；
2、诗是灵魂的种子，发不发芽，开不开花，结不结果，都是诗自己的事情；
3、艾孜哈尔，1999年生，维吾尔族，新疆博乐人。2019年尝试汉语写作，作品见于《白夜谭》《磨铁读诗会》。现在北京上学；
4、对此诗人不甚了解，只有在磨铁读诗会读到其诗数首，纯净而幽远，直接且新鲜，切中生活的深层意趣，弥漫出广阔的视角和掷地有声的力量感；
5、回到本诗，三节十六行，以抒写内心的情感为中心，由三个排比句，道出了生活本质与要义，也是“我”的态度和想法；
6、诗的第一节，亮出内心深处不同的姿态，触及现实中的场景，细致入微而又不失质感，朴实无华且呈现出多样化的人物关系，深刻而清晰；
7、第二节，由两个角色的不同转换，背后却是透彻的思考与探索，复杂而又涉及生死，又一人生之命题；
8、最后一节，以“我”，和三个人，构成了一幅幅生动的画面，溢于字面，而又浸入思想的内部，平实而厚达；
9、诗的标题，以传统的笔触，无限的句法开头，以假定的方式，写下去；
10、本诗给予诗人的启示：“传统与现代有效的结合，并凸显出时代，也是一种视角和境界”；
11、祈愿之诗，心之所见。
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