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DAYS

12月 28, 2024

DAYS

when i loved you
and you loved me
that was a very long time ago.
sometimes it’s here
we are the same
and we are not
everyone knows.
and still the earth goes round the earth
and still the sun goes round the sun
and still the moon goes round the moon
or something like that.
it has been fun
it has been pain
and sometimes something does come again
in different ways.
and there we are
and we have days.

MW December 2024

EIN KLUMPEN BUTTER – 宗尕降初 Changka Gyamtso

3月 1, 2022

Changka Gyamtso
EIN KLUMPEN BUTTER

Wenn jemand im Krankenhaus liegt,
besuch ihn und bring einen Klumpen.

Zum Abschied von Verwandten und Freunden
bring einen Klumpen.

Gehst du zu jemand,
bring einen Klumpen.

Nach dem Streit zur Versöhnung
bring einen Klumpen.

Großer Chef kommt ins Dorf,
bring ihm einen Klumpen.

Sprechstunde beim Lehrer deines Kindes,
bring einen Klumpen.

Also
in tibetischen Breiten
gibt es kein Gefühl,
das ein Klumpen nicht ausdrückt.
Oder doch,
dann halt zwei.

2021-10-28
Übersetzt von MW am 1. Maerz 2022

新世纪诗典作品联展#宗尕降初#(5.0)

 


​新世纪诗典11,NPC3月1日,3984首,1243人。第5个宗尕降初(四川)日

伊沙推荐:​尽管我个人无福消受一一不吃奶及所有的奶制品,但我深知酥油在藏族人民生活中有多重要,不可或缺,本诗将此一点写得酣畅淋漓,是一首十分优秀的现代抒情诗,在这个扩大的三月上半月中,在一众名将高手的比拼中脱颖而出,夺取冠军!宗尕降初,为藏族增了光,为90后争了气!

​侯马:写的好。顿时想喝,顿时想到奶茶,去牧民家必送上一块砖茶,千百年深厚的传统和交流交融的历史流淌至今。

​况禹点评《新诗典》宗尕降初《一坨酥油》:一方水土,生一方饮食,而有些食物对于人际,还会溢出“果腹”之外的意义。从本诗看,酥油在藏民之间,显然属于后者。本诗结尾幽默、灵动,使传统的主题罩上了现代色彩。

【亚坤评诗】
一坨酥油
作者|宗尕降初
(内容详见新诗典今日推送)

宗尕降初,藏族,1992年生,甘孜州人。

我认为这是一首典型的“文化诗”。

如果抛开读者身份,尽力靠近作者内心,走进本诗的情感内部,仔细体会,你就能发现这首诗内部涌动的“民族情感”。
这样看来,它本质上又是一首“抒情诗”。

由于这首诗是用口语写作,除了最后的“个体表达”外,基本上都是事实陈述。所以,从诗歌表层上看,我并没有读出太多“显性抒情的内容”。
这正式此诗值得称赞的地方。现代诗写作,尤其是基于现实生活,立足脚下的一线当代诗写作,据我目力所及,现在基本上没有人会选择“传统抒情诗的模式”。

那种建立在词语之上的“拔高式”抒情模式,在很具体的“事实物象”面前,在很现代的“社会情景模式”面前,在非常复杂的人类情感模式面前,在万物互联的“虚拟空间”面前,已基本失效了。
所以,我看到的抒情诗,更多是让诗歌内容或身体本身说话。它甚至都超越了“冷抒情”,直接回到了“自抒情”模式(姑且这样称呼)。

这首诗就是如此。看似写的是藏区常见的“酥油”,看似只是一种事实的陈述,实则是写藏区人民的“精神内部生活”,实则是写一种“生命之道”。
作者对这块土地上的爱和感情,不是用大而显的“词语抒情”展示出来的(那种力量很弱),而是用一种食物(酥油)的“使用频率”来事实陈述的。
我把这种方式称为“事实的抒情”。

很显然,“酥油”不光是藏区人情、礼仪、风俗、生活的“代表物”,更是一种深入民族心灵内部的“生命物”。它是一种“生命之奶”。更是一种“精神血液”!
这样看,它确实又是一种高度提纯的“文化诗”!

(马亚坤.2022.02.28.上海)

黄平子读宗尕降初《一坨酥油》

——《新世纪诗典》3894

一坨酥油

宗尕降初

有人生病住院
拿一堆酥油去看望

与亲戚朋友告别
送一坨酥油

登门拜访
也拿一坨酥油

打架道歉
还是拿一坨酥油

领导进村入户
也送一坨酥油

家长见孩子老师
当然也可以送一坨酥油

因此
在藏区
没有什么情感是
一坨酥油
表达不了的
如果有
那就两坨

2021-10-28

黄平子读诗:宗尕降初,藏族,1992年生,甘孜州人。有诗歌、小说散见《民族文学》、《西藏文学》、《草堂》等报刊,有作品入选《新世纪诗典》、《汉语先锋:2019年度最佳诗歌100首》、《正在写诗的年轻人》等选本。“有人生病住院/拿一堆酥油去看望”,酥油是健康。“与亲戚朋友告别/送一坨酥油”,酥油是思念。“登门拜访/也拿一坨酥油”,酥油是祝福。“打架道歉/还是拿一坨酥油”,酥油是和平。“领导进村入户/也送一坨酥油”,酥油是关坏。“家长见孩子老师/当然也可以送一坨酥油”,酥油是尊敬。“因此
在藏区/没有什么情感是/一坨酥油/表达不了的/如果有/那就两坨”,酥油是物质。情感是精神。精神要通过物质来传递。物质可以传递精神。一坨酥油是一分情感。两坨酥油是两分情感。一切都是那么简单,一切都是那么质朴,一切都是那么纯洁。一切都是那么美好。好一坨酥油!
2022年3月1日20点16分

伊沙主持 | 新世纪诗典11一周联展(2022.2.20——2.26)

伊沙主持 | 新世纪诗典11一周联展(2022.2.20——2.26)

 

 

FATHOMLESS CLARITY – 庄生 Zhuang Sheng

11月 15, 2020

Zhuang Sheng
FATHOMLESS CLARITY

The stars in the sky
are the relics
of everyone who went far away.

Translated by MW, Nov. 2020

伊沙推荐语:
不知是我心闪一念,还是在哪里已经说过:庄生是能够创造奇迹的人-这不,半月冠军来了!每一种严肃的游戏的创造,就是为了测试诗人的某种能力:总点数测的就是你的耐力、厚度、韧劲、稳定性,半月冠亚军就是测你的单首高度、锐度、创新、爆发力。

新世纪诗典10,NPC11月16日,3514首,1133人。第19个庄生(广东)日

况禹点评《新诗典》庄生《深不可测的清澈》:古典小说、戏曲或神话,常把人的逝去看作“星宿归位”,庄生此诗的想象迴路也有近似的地方。所不同的是作者发掘出了一个新点——“舍利子”——不管是把它们视作生命的结晶还是物理意义上的“结石”,这就一下子让想象有了自我的特点。乍看起来这似乎是容易的事,其实做到不容易,有时甚至需要某种灵光一现的赐福。

梅花驿:诗人,某种意义上讲就是世界新秩序的发现者。祝贺庄生!“发现”了星星、远行的人和舍利子三者之间联系。当远行的人眼里星星和舍利子重合时,这个世界瞬间变成了新的世界。

这首有透明感。试想,一个人要沉淀多少杂质,才能抵达这样孤绝深邃的清澈。诗人和我从未谋面,但能感到他为人淳厚。从他的诗里,能看到他对父亲姐姐妻子女儿学生真实的爱意。仰望星空,在很深的夜里,不畏远行,相信他的修行能终获幸福。

庄生:感谢伊沙老师。明天是我生日。还是我和妻子领证五周年纪念日。神奇推荐

庞琼珍点评:这首有透明感。试想,一个人要沉淀多少杂质,才能抵达这样孤绝深邃的清澈。诗人和我从未谋面,但能感到他为人淳厚。从他的诗里,能看到他对父亲姐姐妻子女儿学生真实的爱意。仰望星空,在很深的夜里,不畏远行,相信他的修行能终获幸福。

明天会更好

6月 5, 2019
May4th

Mateusz Grochocki/Getty Images

明天会更好

有些事不可能更好,
应该承认。
有的事早晚会遭殃。
有的事再好不过,
应该搜集,
有些可以卖,
或可以转代
要好好保护。
有的人不可能更好,
只可能更坏。
这也该承认。
让他丢脸
就容易。
大家都愿意明天会更好。
那大家尽量。

2019.5.27

 

 

华为的问题

中国的问题
不在华为。
我女儿很喜欢
她的华为手机
也许我以后也买一个。
问题是三十年前
有人拿书包上班
可以当英雄,
拦住一大队坦克。
问题不是他当英雄,
是你一直不承认。
你一直不承认
谁相信你?
今天新疆的事,
同样的问题。
哪天有人
拿书包当英雄
承认一些事,
也许还可以
改变一些事,
放一些人。
也许华为
好过。

2019.5.28

君儿读诗 | 2019年4月好诗选

MARTIN LUTHER, CARD GAMES, NATIONAL DAY

10月 31, 2017

500

ob martin luther
gelebt hat
oder gestorben ist
oder beides
ist nicht besonders wichtig
für mich persönlich
martin luther king
war sehr sehr wichtig
und der vor 500 jahren
hat eine sehr wichtige bibel geschrieben
die immer noch gut klingt
und er war wichtig für widerstand
obwohl dann gegen bauern
und in der hinsicht ist er mir
eh auch nicht wurscht.

MW Oktober 2017

 

 

TAROCK

wir spielen um geld
weniger als ein euro
wenn du zehn cent gewinnst
an einem abend
ist es sehr schön
wenn du verlierst
ist es auch nicht so schlimm
hauptsache wir treffen uns
am ende der woche
egal wie die wahl war
in der bibliothek
die bibliothek
ist das schönste am haus
wir spielen um geld
du denkst nur an die karten
es gibt ein bisschen weißwein
vielleicht knabberzeug
manchmal wird auch geredet
manchmal gibt es essen
hauptsache es wird noch gespielt

MW 31. Oktober 2017

 

NEUE REZENSION AUF FIXPOETRY!

Martin Winter
DER MOND MUSS PERFEKT SEIN 《不敢不完美》 SHE HAS TO BE PERFECT / GEDICHTE IN DREI SPRACHEN

REST ASSURED

you are not going to find out
or people won’t know
what happens after you die
or I for that matter
we aren’t important enough
but even with those who are
no-one really knows

MW October 2017

 

SEI GETROST

du wirst es nicht herausfinden
oder es wird nicht bekannt
was passiert wenn du tot bist
oder ich
wir sind nicht wichtig genug
aber auch bei den wichtigen
weiß mans nicht wirklich

MW Oktober 2017

 

Yi Sha 伊沙
ÜBERQUERUNG DES GELBEN FLUSSES 2
Gedichte (2010-2017)
Chinesisch/Deutsch
Übersetzt von Martin Winter
ISBN 978-3-9504423-6-6
€ 15,00

 

AUSTRIAN NATIONAL DAY

austrian national day
2017
it’s a beautiful day
we stand in line on heroes’ square
along the castle
to get into the president’s quarters
next to us in line
is a guy from syria
his german is very good
he hands me his phone
what he writes in german
sounds like 19th century
but it’s clear and correct
a small scrawny guy
don’t know if his family
is still in syria
at least he can stay
there are 12 words or more
for love in arabic
translating himself
into german or english
he feels rather clumsy
going inside the imperial palace
the president’s office
security is not very strict
our guide from the offfice
in her typical
austrian diction
sounds proud and detached
and somewhat ironic
at the same time
we don’t catch the president
but we see the empress
she looks ordinary
the most powerful woman
maria theresia
now this is the room
where the president receives the government
yes, it’s much smaller than on tv
there was heating inside the building
in imperial times
the whole middle tract
air going up and down
all the way to the basement
very advanced for the time
only one room
has a fireplace
they had 15 degrees in this room
15 celsius in winter
this was the warmest place in the building
largest castle in europe
national day, austrian army
the atmosphere is rather relaxed
tee and good music
for everyone
in the president’s courtyard
regional army band, very good jazz
and of course strauss
children climbing
national monuments
austrian national day
nothing to brag about
at least the president
is not a german nationalist
last year wasn’t easy
all those elections
this year is much worse
next year those fuckers
will be in government
it was a nice national day
it’s a beautiful country

MW October 2017

WAHLRECHT – 邢非

9月 29, 2017

Xing Fei
WAHLRECHT

Heuer hab ich schon für zwei Leute,
die ich nicht kenne,
gewählt
und zwei Kugelschreiber bekommen.
Dann hab ich hintereinander
für drei Bekannte gewählt
und drei Kugelschreiber bekommen.
Die hab ich alle nicht mitgehen lassen,
die haben sie mir
beim Eingang ins Wahllokal
lächelnd überreicht.

Übersetzt von MW im August 2017

GLOBAL TIMES 什麼意思?

6月 1, 2017

GLOBAL TIMES

什么意思?
环球时代
我们生活在环球时代
我们是谁
从哪里来
到哪里去

什么意思?
环球时报
不是默多克买下的倫敦時報
但有同样的问题

什么意思?
环球时代
我们生活在环球时代
我们是谁
从哪里来
到哪里去

2017

 

 

GLOBAL TIMES

what are global times?
we are living in global times
who are we
where did we come from
where are we going

what is global times?
global times is a paper in china
not owned by murdoch
but all the same

what are global times?
we are living in global times
who are we
where did we come from
where are we going

MW May 31, 2017

 

See also

MCLC: Curious rise of the “white left” as an insult (2)

 

 

 

 

AVENUE OF ETERNAL PEACE – 春樹 Chun Sue

6月 3, 2014

chun sue questionsChun Sue
QUESTIONS BEFORE GOING TO SLEEP

do you think you are an intellectual?

du you think you are an existentialist?
do you think you like to eat zha jiang mian?
do you think you are collecting antiques?

do you think you are following fashion?
do you think you have improved since you started?
do you think you have fulfilled your ideals?
do you think you’re a patriot?

do you think you love the truth?
do you think you dare to say it?
do you think you don’t fear retribution?
do you think you’re a good writer?

do you think you’re a poet?
do you think you’re a good mother?
do you think you’re a good father?
do you think you have loved?
do you think you are moral?
do you think microblogging makes China improve?

question mark mark mark
do you think they are prophets?
do you think you’re a groupie?

do you think there are things you don’t talk about?
do you think there are people you cannot offend?
do you think this novel is your autobiography?
do you think you have talent?

do you think your stuff is going to last?
do you think you have secrets?
do you think you have a big heart?

do you think you are fair to everyone?
do you think you’re responsible?
do you think you play by the rules?
do you think you have nothing to be ashamed of?

do you think you are self-important?
do you think you want revenge?
do you think you are scared of dying?
do you think you make people like you?
do you think you make people hate you?
do you think you have a future?
do you think you are falling behind?
do you think you are lonely?
do you think you are writing a poem?

this girl makes you crazy
let her go on babbling
asking herself

Tr. MW, June 2014

Chun Sue TraumChun Sue
DREAMING OF LIVING INSIDE A DREAM

Tr. MW, June 2014

Published in EPIPHANY magazine, fall 2014. Go on, look for this great Chinese Dream! I spent October 2014 at Vermont Studio Center with Yi Sha, editor of the daily New Century Poetry series 新世纪诗典. Chun Sue is one of the most well-known figures within this huge independent circle of poets.

Chun Sue Avenue of Eternal PeaceChun Sue
MORNING, AVENUE OF ETERNAL PEACE

Little Brother says: dad, Avenue of Eternal Peace
take a good look
This is the road you walked for over 20 years
I am sitting with Papa and Little Brother
I am almost crying
Finally I know
why I like the Avenue of Eternal Peace
Slowly the car passes the Military Museum
and the red walls of Zhongnanhai
and Xinhua Gate
Papa is small now he fits in an ash box
sitting between us
doesn’t take up much space
We pass the Gate of Heavenly Peace
and I see him
He stands on the square
watching us while we’re passing

Why was it so hard to write about you
You’re the son of a peasant
I was born in a village
I am also the child of a peasant
I put on army songs for you all night
Crying my heart out —
I like all that too.

2012-03-03
Tr. MW, May 2014

Duo Duo: TO BE ABLE

9月 10, 2013
Painting by Sara Bernal

Painting by Sara Bernal

Duo Duo
TO BE ABLE

to be able to drink big gulps of warm wine
to enjoy glory days in stupor
to be able to think
behind the ticking window curtain at noon
think of trivial things
to be really embarrassed for a long time

to be able to take a walk for yourself
sit down on a chair painted green
close your eyes for a while
to be able to sigh
thinking of unpleasant things
to forget where the ash
dropped from your cigarette

to be able to lose your temper
when you are sick, to do undignified things
to be able to walk along a familiar road
walking all the way home
to have someone kiss you
wash you scrub you, to have exquisite lies
waiting for you, to be able to live in this way

would be great, any place, any time
picking flowers
mouths finding mouths
no unrests no revolution
what flows down to the ground is the sacrificed wine
to be able to live in this way
would be great, would be the ultimate thing to enjoy!

Tr. MW, Sept. 2013

多多

《能夠》

能够有大口喝醉烧酒的日子
能够壮烈、酩酊
能够在中午
在钟表滴嗒的窗幔后面
想一些琐碎的心事
能够认真地久久地难为情

能够一个人散步
坐到漆绿的椅子上
合一会儿眼睛
能够舒舒服服地叹息
回忆并不愉快的往事
忘记烟灰
弹落在什么地方

能够在生病的日子里
发脾气,作出不体面的事
能够沿着走惯的路
一路走回家去
能够有一个人亲你
擦洗你,还有精致的谎话
在等你,能够这样活着

可有多好,随时随地
手能够折下鲜花
嘴唇能够够到嘴唇
没有风暴也没有革命
灌溉大地的是人民捐献的酒
能够这样活着
可有多好,要多好就有多好!

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